Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 17, 2020
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Well done Esme! It looks like you have put a lot of effort into your tally chart. I can see that you have really gone through the all the contents of your fridge to make sure everything is included. Maybe next time you could use a different colour instead of the yellow as it is quite hard to read. My favourite fruit is an apple and my favourite vegetable is a Brussel Sprout! What is your favourite fruit and Vege?
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ReplyDeleteGreat post about the fruit and veges at your house. My favourite fruit right now is red apples. I especially like Ambrosia or Eve apples. My favourite veg would be broccoli. I agree with Mrs Atkinson that a colour other than yellow would be better to use. Not that I don't like yellow, but it is hard to read on a screen. Looking forward to reading more posts from you Esme! Mrs Pascoe
My favorite vegetable is a cucumber and I don't have a favorite fruit
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