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Friday, May 1, 2020

How I love horses

5 comments:

  1. Hay Esme I like the colour of your writing. I saw that you missed a space between because and you. I like horses too!

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  2. kia ora Esme Bree here I love it because I love horses.But next time maybe add more slides and reread it because you didn't put a space in beteewn because and you and more of a catchy title. By Bree

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  3. Hi Esme, thank you for your slide on horses, I now know that you really enjoy these animals. Maybe next time you could give a small description about the learning you were doing and why you created this slide. Keep posting your learning, don't forget our Think 6 process :)

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  4. Kia ora Esme
    Thanks for sharing about why you like horses. Do you have your own horse or would you like to get one? I'm sure they are a lot of work to look after but well worth the hard work!

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