Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, March 30, 2020
Pigeon Impossible
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Esme, I love the way you have joined key photos together to tell a story. It would be really cool if you turned this into a comic and included some speech bubbles to tell the reader what is going on. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Esme, no I haven't watched the video Pigeon Impossible but I love what you have done with the pictures to create a story, how clever. Keep up the great mahi!
ReplyDeleteHi Esme, I really like the images you have chosen, It makes me want to watch this video. This video looks like it is from The Literacy Shed, which has a really cool selection, you should check it out! To make this more of a quality blog post, you could add a reflection.
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