Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 14, 2020
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Esme, I really like your writing it looks like you worked very hard on it!
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time add a bit more to your description.
I think you have done a very nice setup and good quality writing.
Byee!
Hi Esme, I am Peitynn from Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked your story about Goldilocks and the 3 bears. It also reminds me of when I read the book and watched it too. Maybe next time you could add a little bit more to your description and why you chose the book. Anyway thank you for sharing your blog post with me and I would like you to leave a comment on my blog at http://wpspeitynnf.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteBLOG YOU LATER!!!!